Wednesday evening here we are… Time for another WIPpet post and ROW80 check-in.
Today is the 14th of August, so here are fourteen sentences not from any bit of Swan Song, but from my Was Variation fanfic (I explain why in my ROW80 check-in).
I’ve posted pieces of the Was Variation before on this blog if anyone feels they want more (including this small snippet of erotica here). In fact, my first WIPpet was from this fanfic (which is based on the 80’s cartoon Jayce and the Wheeled Warriors and the original Star Trek series). It involves many of the characters from Swan Song after they’ve grown up, apart and discovered lives of their own.
This WIPpet comes toward the beginning of the fanfic, where Jayce is leading a young woman, Andreya, down to the ship captain’s quarters. The captain was seriously injured in an attack, and the pair are checking on his well-being.
“We’re here.” He stopped in front on another unlabeled steel door, remarkable only for the large electronic pad near shoulder-height at one side. He pressed his hand on the sensor. “Voice override,” he said crisply. Yet when the touchscreen turned yellow, he mumbled, “I hate wearing charmeuse.”
A bland masculine electronic voice replied.|Override not initiated. Password not recognized. Re-try?|
Glancing over to his guest, he frowned. “Yes.” He waited for the screen to change color again. “I hate wearing charmeuse.”
This time the screen flashed green and the door slid open. Andreya entered the room without a word, cautiously, then with increased haste.
He saw why immediately. Herc had tried to move again—how he had the strength, Jayce could only imagine—and was once more laying prone on the floor.
“Damn.” Unwilling to leave the girl to the labor alone, he hurried over. “You can see he’s not a very good patient.”
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What made me drop Swan Song? After three months of doing WriMos on the Swan Song series without giving myself time to explore and play with the characters, I was feeling a bit burned out. I thought reducing my writing load would help, but that actually seems to be harming me more than helping. Emotionally I feel happier when I write stories. I feel more curious and excited about things. Not writing closes me off… even if it feels easier to do (and often is, because of ennui or distractions).
Still, I couldn’t get much written in Swan Song these past few weeks. A lot of circular word-wrangling that dragged on in my character’s heads but didn’t seem to be propelling the story forward… After a week of this, I gave up and decided my brain needed some playtime. So I’m tossing some sand in the air, filling buckets to turn over… having some fun.
Beyond that, progress on editing seems stalled for this week. I’m still in a reading and watching mood at the moment. The writing is coming back though. And since I need to finish my piece for Collaborating Chaos by Sunday at the latest, that’s a good thing.
Exercise? Yep! Even went to the YMCA with Shan Jeniah for a swim yesterday. Progress… Slow, steady, progress.
How about you? Did you make a discovery that has renewed your joy in something? Did you try something new “just because”?